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:iconjohnnydwicked:
Great teaser. Grabbed my attention and ended with unexpected closure. I would considered working more on anticipation where the squash part of the present gets squashed down as it lands and finally the release of the top. Also add more anticipation and further exaggerate the popping out of the other presents, too. The the creature at the end could have been anticipation and exaggerated as well as it pops out of the final small present. The tops of each present have to land back down and not disappear because I did expect them to fall back down; but then again, there could be other reasons why you didn't included.

Most of the fix I would consider is stretch the limits of the squash and anticipation.

Great work though. XD
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LunaBluex Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
"mhmmmm happeh biirthdayh, hmm, squeak."
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Dragondog2233 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD "Happy Birthday.... Squeak..." :icontrollfaceplz:
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:iconchimeraditto:
ChimeraDitto Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
...LOL :D
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:iconmrb34n5:
MRB34N5 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011   Filmographer
lol
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:iconrakdle:
RaKDle Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011
ousoom! LOL
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:iconselyelydis:
SelyElyDis Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Student General Artist
XD LOL!
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:iconjsac38:
jsac38 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Timing, squash and stretch are perfect!
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:iconcarpish:
carpish Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
The timing on your animations is particularly excellent
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:iconwcfmix:
WCFMix Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011
haha I didn't expect a giant rat xD
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:iconmeap27:
meap27 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
lol
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:iconpedrozanin:
pedrozanin Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome work, i loved it.
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:icontwolanes:
twolanes Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011   Writer
awesome
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:icondavidcoombes:
DavidCoombes Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Critique : Faultless? :D
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:iconnoreydragon:
NoreyDragon Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Ahh it's so awesomeeee :D And the rat is just.... ahhh <3
sorry, I don't have any words for this
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Sprybug Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Professional Filmographer
Critique requested? Don't know what I would do to make it better! Great work.
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:iconkarr420:
Karr420 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Professional Filmographer
thanks dude!
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:iconchi-u:
chi-u Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dude I loove your animations!
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:iconkarr420:
Karr420 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Professional Filmographer
Really glad you like em :D
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